My zoo letter

Room 2AM

Kestrel Block

Pinehill School

Browns Bay

Auckland

Thursday 17 September

Dear Zoo Keeper,

I am writing to you to offer my opinion about my enclosure I am kept in.

First, I am going to tell you about my very tall trees.  I have a lot of tall trees to climb, they are as tall as the sky tower, and I can play hide and seek in them. Service in the zoo is amazing. I feel like I’m in zoo heaven. Also, can I please have a bowl of water?

But, as always there are cons with everything, so I am going to tell you them.  I don’t like the thick glass because I would like to be able to interact with the people more. If I had a fence that was glass, but a little lower, I would love you even more.

Lots of love,

Bo

The weird friend part 2

In front of Lina was Jessica but she didn't look normal she was a vampire.Lina was so frightened she almost jumped out of her skin."What do you want?" asked Lina "oh you don't know me?" said Jessica "Its me your new friend" Lina was confused."But your a vampire" cried Lina "i'm here to destroy the human race and then us vampires will take over" shouted Jessica she put hand cuffs on Lina's hands "the police will get you"shouted Lina back " oh no they won't i'm a vampire remember." Jessica had left Lina started crying then she herd a noise a slight roar "NO"......



                                              To be continued