My card writing

Card 1

Scared, I said goodbye to my nice mum I was a little bit excited for my first day of school.

Slowly, I hopped into the yellow bus and waved to my amazing, mum.

Then the bus driver started the loud engine and we started moving as slow as a sloth then as fast as a cheetah.

I slowly hopped out of the big yellow bus to my hard working class.

Happy, my teacher told us her name “Miss Lister.”

Sad that my mum wasn’t there I had to do art which was fun then we did writing that was fun too but then we did the dark the evil the devil of all school subject MATH!!!!.

I screamed and I got told off

I said “sorry” to the teacher she said “thats ok we do easy maths anyway” my face was as bright as the sun and I cheered “YAY.”

At the end of the day my mum was there to pick me up I was as happy a puppy with a brand new chew toy “did you have fun today?” and I shouted “YES!” then we went home and I had a nice cup of lemonade and after that I went for a swim in my pool.

The next day I was sick so I couldn’t go to school I was as sad as a 15 year-old girl who got dumped by her boyfriend but any way I played school at home I did art,math,writing and reading by the end of the day I was super tired so I had dinner and went to bed at 6:00.

similes

1.my face was as bright as the sun and I cheered “YAY.”

2.we started moving as slow as a sloth.
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then as fast as a cheetah.